Endings…

How often do you watch a film or TV series and feel the ending is a let down? It seems to be the norm rather than the anomaly nowadays, as if, in these days of short term concentration and visual effects spectaculars, an actual logical, pleasing resolution to a story is considered less important than hooking the audience in the first place. It’s my contention that too many franchises simply cannot have effective endings because the actual drama is severely restricted by the need for the main characters to be alive and well at the end – for example with almost every comic book adaptation in the last twenty years.

Maybe it’s a harsh comparison, but compare the endings of say the serious Oscar contenders this year – The Artist, The Descendants, Moneyball – to some of the great films of the past. Their resolutions are satisfactory, but not much more. You don’t have their conclusions cemented into your memory the way the greats of yesteryear still are. Is it too negative to suggest that getting people to spend money watching these films is more important than the films themselves having a real impact? I don’t think so. All of those three films are very good, but do you come out of the cinema going ‘Wow!’. Nope.

I’m in the process of writing an ending to a feature length script at the moment and along with my co-creator we’ve been deliberating the possibilities endlessly. Sometimes you have the ending and work backwards, but in this case we started with the characters and worked forwards and this resulted in us having 3-4 possibilities for an ending, all of which we’re reasonably happy with, but not completely set on. Hopefully we can find the one that is most likely to get the audience to go – wow! Back to work…

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The joy of research in the 21st century

Ah, how the writer’s lot becomes ever easier as technology – and particularly the internet – makes research a speedy joy rather than a tiresome slog. Today I was looking into standard police protocol for fatal car accidents. A couple of hours later I felt as if I could start up my own collision investigation while obeying the rigorous procedural requirements. The organisational hierarchy of the Strathclyde Police Force took another 30 minutes. Then it was time to delve into the depths of autopsies and post-mortems, coroners and pathologists, inquests and inquiries. A couple of hours later and what would have taken weeks just a decade or two ago, was done in an afternoon.

Now all I have to do is work out what the story is…

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Slogans for Screenwriters – from Alexander MacKendrick

Came across this page on Paul Cronin’s site ‘The Sticking Place’ - also an excellent source of knowledge on the likes of Polanski and Herzog. Slogans for the Screenwriters wall is extracts from the teachings of Alexander MacKendrick, ranging from the direct to the abstract:

‘A character who is dramatically interesting is intelligent enough to THINK AHEAD.’

‘What you leave out is as important as what you leave in.’

‘Screenplays come in three sizes: LONG, TOO LONG and MUCH TOO LONG.’

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3rd and final day London Screenwriters Festival

It was a day bookended by the tireless Mr Christopher Jones, starting with Social Media and ending with Manifestation. Hats off to Chris on a festival that ran like clockwork and was filled with so much to see that I’m going to have to watch most of it when they put up the videos for all the seminars I missed. The rest of the day was filled with analysing parallel narratives (courtesy of Linda Aronson), script tips from Philip Shelley, Danny Stack, , Steven Russell, Daniel Martin Eckhart, Paul Andrew Williams, Evan Leighton-Davis. Yup, lot of double barrelled names there…

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Day 2 of the London Screenwriters Festival

Another interesting day at the LSF, there are certainly worse ways to spend one’s weekends. Writers, writers everywhere… highlight of the day was Paul Cronin talking about legendary director Alexander Makendrick, worthy of another post on its own.

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Day One of the London Screenwriters Festival

The London Screenwriters Festival 2011 kicked off today, its second year in operation. They have 100 speakers and 500 delegates this year along with a feast of activities including pitching classes and script workshops. Today I heard Chris Vogler talking through a live feed about the The Writers Journey, based of course on the work of Joseph Campbell, Paul Ashton (head of development at BBC WritersRoom), and Anne Mensah, Ben Stephenson and Robert Wulff-Cochrane explaining what Sky, the Beeb and C4 are looking for in terms of scripts and drama. And that was a fraction of the attractions of offer. I’ll be there tomorrow for another feast of encouraging information…

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Next stage of development for TV project

Outline and first ten page sample has been read by our potential lead actor and he’s interested in working on the project. I’m moving on with the first half of the script. A couple of very constructive brainstorms has outlined the major plot points and characters, now its just a question of putting pen to paper (or at least fingers to keyboard) and seeing how the skeleton holds up once we start putting flesh on da bones…

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